Here’s a first try. If I feel motivated, I may try lightening the clouds a bit, but then the bridge towers (especially the gray ones) will look unnaturally dark for the brighter sky.

Here’s a first try. If I feel motivated, I may try lightening the clouds a bit, but then the bridge towers (especially the gray ones) will look unnaturally dark for the brighter sky.

Definite improvement in visual interest, Joel. It is tempting to keep working on the sky but I think I’d leave it as is at this point.
I think you’re going in the right direction!